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last night i'm dreaming
i'm dreaming about you
i don't know why i can dreaming about you
but,i'm happy
because i can see you again
in my dream you look realy beautiful
that's first time for me,you realy different
why i'm dreaming about you
I try to think about that
maybe i miss you
maybe i can see you again in the another live
not in the place
because i know
me and you were in a differnt nature
I always pray and hope that something the best for you
I WILL ALWAYS LOVE AND MISS YOU


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last night i'm dreaming
i'm dreaming about you
i don't know why i can dreaming about you
but,i'm happy
because i can see you again
in my dream you look realy beautiful
that's first time for me,you realy different
why i'm dreaming about you
I try to think about that
maybe i miss you
maybe i can see you again in the another live
not in the place
because i know
me and you were in a differnt nature
I always pray and hope that something the best for you

kak suci bantu setw kak suci aj y...
Kalau last night jangn pakai present tense, tapi pakai past tense. tp kalau mw pakai bentu sedangny, gunakan past continuous tense..

perhatikan aj lagi waktuny.. kalau menceritakan yang lampau, pakai bentuk lampau jg...
Selebihnya sudh bagus.. sering2 aj buat kyk itu biar lancar dan terlatih..

seperti kata pepatah, Lancar kaji karena diulang...

semangat yy..

makasih ka'ka
ka' suci baik
ka' akhnukh mno ka'???
SELAMAT HARI RAYA IDUL ADHA

tulisan diferent yo jg salah th......heehe :bingung1:

aq jg sma sperti mu yurrr...semoga dia bahagia walau bukan bersaMa ku
aq seng melihat dia bis terseyum lg :love3: :love3: :love3: :love3:

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A+ wrote:

Iko Lirik Lagu Dangduts Yo ?,

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yuri wrote:

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Iko Lirik Lagu Dangduts Yo ?,

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Biasalah, si admin suka banget lagu dangdut..
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hanson wrote:

yuri wrote:

A+ wrote:

Iko Lirik Lagu Dangduts Yo ?,

Enak b
dasar tkang suudzon

Biasalah, si admin suka banget lagu dangdut..
jadi semua lirik dibilang lagu dangdut.. :malu2:

:nari1: